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I do not compare
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I do not compare |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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I do not compare she is Goddess who stole my God His violent clap of thunder shakes me out of revolution I dream of before sleep every night Whichever form temptation took it were Goddess of vile addiction and I will never compare [This message has been edited by gemjop (10-19-2003 03:57 PM).] |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This was aweome.I have to tell you though, that you aren't only a poetess but also a goddess in your own right.Never compare yourself to someone else you are perfect just the way you are.  Crystal |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes, adreed, ditto, awesome, but there is no comparison...darling, no one is a Godess, all of us have faults, believe if you will, that you are in all of who you are...perfection! smiles and hugs.... What a writer you are. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
I spelt temptation wrong! oh but i hate the way it looks underneath with the this message was edited at...it spoils it. so sorry. You two? you're too kind. thankyou both, your replies are always such an encouragement, seriously, you are wonderful friends. The Goddess I speak of is not neccessarily human, but is just as powerful. i can't explain, my head's too fuzzy.  Thankyou.  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
there are good addictions too and you and your words are an example..that absolute tool(l@ve that word) went for the wrong one |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Gemma, if I read this correctly, his "Goddess" was a "vile addiction"? If that is so, then my sweet friend, you are way above his other "Goddess". But, really, you are anyway, you know. By the way, you can edit your posts without anyone knowing, because the color won't show. This is how...... Go back into your edit box and delete the "/" in front of "/font". Then on the other side of the word "font, put......color="bfdfff". I would do it for you, so you could see, but I can't in this forum. Hope that helps. Love and hugs  Ethel |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Damn girl, I stand in awe of the way you write. You used a great theme and images to add to the poem's strength. I only wish that I could write more consise like you. But, I'll just say that I relate as usual. Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
*cries* thankyou ethel, but for some reason i can't do it!! why oh why? |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
You put a space between....font...and...color...and put...bfdfff....in quotation marks. (I edited this reply so that you can go into my post and see.......just click on the "edit" box of my post here. It's at the bottom.....) [This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-19-2003 04:53 PM).] |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
nothing else compares... when was the last time I heard that song? I'm suffering a severe withdrawl. seriouly gem you are awsome and don't deserve the unhappiness  What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Gemma, you always write with such depth and heart, sweet friend, I think ever too much we compete with what feel like demi-gods at first, only to then see their exposed inferior interior! (big hugggsssssss) You truly are special, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Gemma~ Oh I have fought the goddess myself, and thankfully she won... I am going to bed now because I am sick  Thanks for the goodnight read! "if you won't let me fall for you then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you" ~Dido~ [This message has been edited by Susan Caldwell (10-19-2003 10:50 PM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Gem, this is heartbreaking and excellently worded, as well.. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This is such wonderful writing, I really enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing this with us. Andy |
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