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Open Poetry #29

Risky Business

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

0 posted 2003-10-18 10:57 PM

risky business
a game i play
to win or lose
no matter cost

all n' all out
a war it is
seeking the weak
choking out life

no price too high
no name too great
admit you're done
my life, my game

Ya know what they say. Curiosity salted the snail.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-10-18 11:26 PM

I really liked it. Powerful write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2003-10-18 11:26 PM

Hugsssss hon, hang in there there are brighter days ahead....PEACE

Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember
the names it has blown in the past
with its crutch, its old age, and its
wisdom it whispers no this won't be the last

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

3 posted 2003-10-20 02:49 AM

Thanks you guys...just venting.

Ya know what they say. Curiosity salted the snail.

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