Open Poetry #29 |
early crocus bloom |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Where? o there across the sill there they are in bend of field ladened by the night sad song dripping tears and sparkling here I grow like one of them stubborn scrawl of underneath covered with her winter'd cloak. tiny spindlings of me tiny tiny grippings need I am color in your eyes on this page of fleece-- I spoke a vision of the sun I feel here beneath the snow. [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (10-19-2003 03:39 AM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Karen~ Not sure why this hasn't received any responses yet...slackers...but I loved it. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
they live, even in just our shred of essence on this earth, they live |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...because we were sleeping when you slipped in the seed... at least, that's my reply to Susan and I'm sticking to it! What a lovely way to wake up, Karen... to an early crocus bloom. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (10-19-2003 08:16 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Your wonderful words are always blooming poppy fields and shasta lilies, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet firend, this is most enjoyable, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
These words are wonderful. Crystal |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
tiny spindlings of me tiny tiny grippings need I am color in your eyes on this page of fleece-- I spoke a vision of the sun I feel here beneath the snow in such acknowledgementss is also the strength to survive below the snow... enjoyed my friend..as always. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, Your giving me a snow job. LOL Enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes..we are fighters, just like the tiny crocus beneath the snow.. Good write Karen... Hugs~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
yes. ..and then one day you find..ten years have got behind you..no one told you when to run..you missed the starting gun.. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
one of my favorite from you enjoyed |
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