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Ku'uipo
Junior Member
since 2003-09-25
Posts 42


0 posted 2003-10-18 08:41 PM



Dear lover
I fell into your hands and you into my heart
I wept tears and you wept no more
The stars shone bright and the clouds disappeared
And still i sit here writing about love
Another word written
Another song sung
And still i sit here writing about love
Hope was found and fear was lost
Laughter rang high and silence drew near
I saw my soul and lost sight of my pain
And still i sit here writing about love
My heaven was blurred and your dreams came true
My hurt wilted away and i only saw you
My tears, my song, your dreams from above
And still i sit here writing about love
Sincerely yours...

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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
1 posted 2003-10-18 08:43 PM


I don't remember seeing you before so..

Welcome!

I enjoyed your poem!

Susan

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Magnus
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Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
2 posted 2003-10-18 08:46 PM


Contagious, isn't it?  A four letter word
spelled a thousand different ways...yet with
the same meaning and feeling all the world
over.

And here we are,  all of us...

writing about love.

Nice write, enjoyed,  thank you.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2003-10-21 05:19 AM


Sincerely...James
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