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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2003-10-18 08:20 PM

(This is my response to Earth Angel's challenge, yay! Hope you enjoy it!)

Aura Reader
By: Noah Eaton
10/18/03
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Learning xenoglossy as a third language...

speaking in clairsentient tongues,

slate-writing my signature,

building a roof inside mysticism.

Up through technique,

down through coincidence,

I recognize the Zener card impressions,

staring, taking precedence...
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Sometimes things are meant to get lost,

when you translate,

and maybe we already heard them before,

but I know,

there's more than just shape-shifting,

in this epic veridical dream...
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Table-tilting this subliminal perception,

the Aura Reader sips her darjeeling tea,

on the rim of her teacup,

designing patterns with the leaves.

Her eyes like Tibetan tapestries,

pupils scattered about like Zulu bones,

scrying through the pale clair de lune,

everything makes awkward sense, I know...
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I don't know what else she has to say,

but I think I get it,

seanced lips humming B-flat,

in cycles of spinning plates,

57 octaves below Middle C,

and the brown note,

becomes white noise,

echoing through the crystal radio...
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Cross-legged like a Bavarian pretzel,

proxy-sitting with the prophet,

blind-matching the drawings,

in a laying on of hands with the Amazing Kreskin,

snapping Kirlian photography through my mind,

of angels,

silhouettes, space brothers,

Daemon and Saturday night Dionne Warwick infomercials...
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...and as my mind loses oxygen,

piling up newspaper horoscopes and Akashic records,

as a blanket over my learned body,

arcing corn circles with my relaxing arms,

I give the light in the Aura Reader's eyes a cold-reading,

watching the Kool-aid halo,

encircle her spirit...
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...and this very moment,

it's more than just hope and stars,

that mark the highways to heaven...
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I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***
[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-18-2003 08:22 PM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-10-18 08:33 PM

Noah! Hey sidekick..this is your best by far!!
You not only met the challenge but,
incorporated so many areas of the unexplained.
So very interesting...and right up my alley!
I love this..and into my library it goes.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2003-10-18 11:59 PM

Noah~

this is so very lovely....and the pictures are just as stunning as the write....hugssss you...

Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember
the names it has blown in the past
with its crutch, its old age, and its
wisdom it whispers no this won't be the last

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-10-19 12:02 PM

This was an awesome write Noah

Cold hands means a warm heart

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-10-19 12:28 PM

Noah, you really took us right along on the
trip with you in this one, my friend.

I enjoyed reading this.
Hugs

Ethel

Oh, and I loved this art work. Do you make graphics, Noah?
If you do, you'll have to make one for me and Gary
for one of my love poems.

paraboxer
Member

since 2002-11-10

Posts 121
Maryland, USA

5 posted 2003-10-19 12:35 PM

Some things, my friend, are universal. The ideals of Truth, Beauty, Freedom, and Love for example...

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

6 posted 2003-10-19 11:01 AM

Well said...a difficult poem but a true one: both true and True.

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______________Ratleader______________

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2003-10-19 05:39 PM

enjoyed

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

8 posted 2003-10-19 10:38 PM

Hello Noah

Your extensive vocabulary never ceases to amaze me and the pictures complimented your words wonderfully.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2003-10-19 11:18 PM

Noah...You're pretty amazing!

Kaz
Junior Member

since 2003-10-12

Posts 26

10 posted 2003-10-19 11:26 PM

Your writing is amazing. I love reading it.

Kaz

paraboxer
Member

since 2002-11-10

Posts 121
Maryland, USA

11 posted 2003-10-20 12:01 PM

I just want to thank you for being so supportive with my current problem. The main reason I never told her is I fear she'll turn away from me and I'll lose a friendship I have valued for a long time.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

12 posted 2003-10-21 04:47 PM

Noah, I almost missed this New Age treasure! It is stunning on all levels and it appeals to me on all levels as well. I thoroughly enjoyed this!

I'm thrilled that you accepted the challenge! ~ and not only did you meet it, ~ you surpassed my expectations!

Loveya!
EA

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

13 posted 2003-10-21 05:52 PM

Noah, i hate to keep wierding you out or anything...but...i love you. lol. this is genius. great job!!! =)

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

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