Open Poetry #29 |
Briar and Brambles, Beastly Gambles |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thistles and thorns line the way, winding skyward into shadows growing ever longer as daylight fades into the darkness that patiently waits it’s call. Quietly walking, the hammering heart signaling fear, panic bursting at the seams of a chest gulping for air, stifling a scream. The beam of a fading light wavering, searching the shadows for glowing eyes, eyes that stare and blink, and then.... disappear as a twig breaks... Turning swiftly, trying to catch the feel of what brings the hackles to rise, finding only still damp air. A simple cabin, somewhere ahead, beyond the fog that grows steadily, rising like a specter from the tomb of earth, cold to the touch of skin. Listen.....hear the whispers of dark souls. Hear the call of beast and fowl. Heed the howling winds beyond the summit high... For on this night of fear and dread, of drooling maws.....of things now dead a scream shall fall upon the ears, a curdling sound from now past years. And when the moon does crest the peak, the strong shall pounce the frail and weak. The earth shall crawl, the ground shall shake and fear shall come in shivering quake... |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
you do remind of my best friend... But he is poetic because of the overwhelming pain, and the hopeless love he has. I hope that isn't what brings you to this melancholy beauty. Loved it, always do. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Allysa, Though I am a hopeless romantic...it is not that which draws me here among the flowers and trees and so much more... It is you, all of you, that draw me here... |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
And when the moon does crest the peak, the strong shall pounce the frail and weak. The earth shall crawl, the ground shall shake and fear shall come in shivering quake Very much enjoyed Barry...loved the thought of the earth crawling. ~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I am saving this one for CP (my daughter, Chelsea). She is at her friend's house this eve. This is wonderful, Barry...the images, the flow. I closed my eyes after certain lines to let the image settle in my mind. Now a story evoked by your Poe spirit. I will try keep it brief. I knew a woman several years ago. She was a poet...had her Masters Degree in English. This was long before I thought about writing again. She took me to a local coffee house where the poet's recite...a sort of bizarre place, decorated in 1960's psychadelia. Anyway, she was at one point, well, a bit insane...not just my opinion, either. She spent a little time in lock down. Anyway, she had her 6 year old son memorize some of Poe's work and recite it when he went trick or treating. Where did this come from, you ask. Who knows? I just thought you would enjoy this little story. Plus, I have been taking care of a 4 year old with the flu...I am a bit stir crazy, too. LOL Love the work and am keeping it to read to CP. Patricia |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Pat, I have written a few Poe style poems that I posted about a year or so ago. I will try to find one or two that CP can read and get a chuckle from...I am sure you will also... Thanx always for your warm review....makes an old man's heart swell... /pip/Forum69/HTML/002093.html and yes, I did enjoy the story.... Good luck with the 4YO....hope they get well.... [This message has been edited by Magnus (10-18-2003 11:00 PM).] |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
hehe..This made me think of Halloween time. Wow, a walk through a scary forest. Set the mood don't ya. Spooky one.. Love, Terri~ |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
Kinda spooky! I enjoyed! Larry |
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IrishDreamer Member
since 2003-10-18
Posts 55Kansas |
Halloween one of my favorite times of year. You painted a spooky portrait beautifully. Loved it ~Angie~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"And when the moon does crest the peak, the strong shall pounce the frail and weak. The earth shall crawl, the ground shall shake and fear shall come in shivering quake..." Reminded me of Poe as well... Scary and at the same time, exciting... "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, One of your best strong and well done. |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
It can be that way -- is that way sometimes, and it doesn't take a holiday to produce it. |
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