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Seeping Memories
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Seeping Memories |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Seeping Memories Into my thoughts memories slowly seep filled with love and joy; emotions to keep. Held in fondness through out passing of time *~a journal of life, kept within a rhyme.*~ A wisp of feelings, blown upon the breeze. At one with the earth, her skies and blue seas. Capturing moments from here and from there: *~a life time on paper for us to share.*~ I've travelled this road, while you travelled that leading us to the paths we are now at. Parts of the journey were hard, some were not *~Completing circles of a life we sought*~ *~Now I remember those days of the past.... Leaving my soul filled with peace...that will last*~ © Donna Smith 9-23-03 ....It's better than I could have planned~ it's made me who I AM..... (Trace) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (09-23-2003 11:29 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a gently wonderful come-back poem... it's so good to see you again here in your poetry home...we have missed you so much! This poem speaks to your recent upheaval after the car accident, and gives us a gentle reminder [sort of like disclosing Donna...] that we must hold on to what is most important to us... This is so very, very nice... library time. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (09-23-2003 10:37 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"*~Now I remember those days of the past.... Leaving my soul filled with peace...that will last*~" So so good to read you here my friend. I love the way you closed each stanza with a most exquisite line. Be well...stay strong. ~Loving hugs, Nancy~
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so very lovely, Donna. I hope that your fared/faired(not sure which  well during the storm and the following rains.We lost electricity for a day and half, and luckily this week I wasn't flooded. Many leaves and branches to pick up, though and outside objects to reset. Hope you are feeling well. My love to you and April hugs M |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice to see you back... and nice to read again from your pen... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Dearest Donna, you certainly haven't lost your touch! This is perfect. I have missed your writing and your sweet face. hugs, Chris Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
So very nice to see your back and with such a profound entrance poem. Isn't nice to sit back and remember the good feelings? |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
*~Now I remember those days of the past.... Leaving my soul filled with peace...that will last*~ Donna, it's so good to see you back. This poem has such a peaceful feel to it. Aren't memories wonderful? And what's so good about it, is that as long as we live, we have the ability to make more memories.  Hugs to you, sweet lady  Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"*~a journal of life, kept within a rhyme.*~ *~a life time on paper for us to share.*~ *~Completing circles of a life we sought*~" ~~Graceful words from a gentle spirit.  Welcome back, Donna! You have been sorely missed! Love & Light, Linda |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ This is just so tenderly who you are~ Beautiful expression` *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is good food for the soul and just what I needed to read today. Every verse was my favorite!! It's great to read you again Donna~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
It is so good to be among friends again. Thank you all so very much for the wonderful welcome home...and what a wonderful place to be! Peace to all....  |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
 LOVELY. Hope I get to be as good a writer as you Aunt Donna, awesome job. 'nough said."I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very well expressed and a enjoyed read,,, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is soooooooo beautiful and I am so happy to see you make a grand comeback like this, yay! (kiss on cheek) May every day bring you even more special memories and inner-peace, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Hello! This is one of Staci's friends, Jess. You've met me before and I'm not sure if you remember me or not. Staci gave me the link to your poem through instant message and I figured I would reply! This poem was amazing poem! Every word just flowed together perfectly. Great work and I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry! ~Jess  "Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
My thanks again to all. I appreciate the welcome home very much. Stac......luv ya kiddo, and thanks. I will be seeing you and Jess in Teen shortly, so get ready for some fun! Peace to poetry land! |
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