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The Return |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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A fish jumps, thrashing in the air, falls with a splash. A startled bird flies, circles down to land again as my thoughts return to you. [This message has been edited by Ratleader (10-18-2003 10:27 AM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed....So much can happen in a moment. I like the way you related nature to a human connection...it concludes the poem in such a lovely way.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Come, and go Give, and take Lift, and return You did that with this. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Really awesome, Ed. A lot of thoughts circled in my head while I was reading this. LOL Hugs Ethel |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Still smiling at this. This is great! Patricia |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sometimes Ed, one moment is worth a lifetime.....beautiful! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When you love someone enough, nothing can distract your thoughts from them for long. *S* I like this very much, my friend... a striking look at nature... and human nature. *S* Excellent! *S* |
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