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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-10-18 07:58 AM

autumn cries with tears
swept along the winds of fate
the boy i once loved

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (10-18-2003 07:33 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-10-18 08:02 AM

inkedgoddess
A lovely sad haiku.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2003-10-18 08:44 AM

I remember the first boy I ever kissed and loved...Eric Waterman, (forgive me)6th grade, spin the bottle, group party ...wonder where he is today...

~smiling
M

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-10-18 09:11 AM

For all the boys out there
who gave the first kiss...
thank you.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-10-18 09:18 AM

Oh, yes. I remember that boy...

EA

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

5 posted 2003-10-18 11:56 AM

What a loss for the boy you once loved

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-10-18 02:00 PM

gah

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2003-10-18 02:28 PM

I remember my first....still sticks with me.
After a ton of years have washed under the
bridge...

Nicely written, though sad...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2003-10-18 03:04 PM

Well said....I remember my first as well.
*Where is your beautiful picture?*
~Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

PassionandFun
Member

since 2003-07-30

Posts 60

9 posted 2003-10-18 09:24 PM

I'm right here!!! LOL short and sweet - very nice

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

10 posted 2003-10-18 11:08 PM

Fate is a fickle one to contend with...
but whatcha gonna do!
Nice pic girlie, going shoppin' again?

Big hugs~

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

11 posted 2003-10-19 12:00 PM

change boy to girl and i hears yah

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

12 posted 2003-10-19 07:52 AM

thanks for reading
and lori
lolol
...............
anything fresh at the market out in your neck of the woods.....hmmmm pass some over.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

13 posted 2003-10-20 10:04 AM

Within leaves of late
I glimpse a slice of myself
naked, lying . . . still

beautiful Michele
bittersweet indeed
*smile* I know . . .
(love your picture!)
xxoo

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

14 posted 2003-10-20 10:13 AM

enjoyed

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