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Open Poetry #29

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pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-10-18 02:15 AM

red waves invite realities.
i
choose or build my own.
iron drops calmed in water
sound existent
breaking the ritual.
dripping
drop by drop
freely
a definition of freedom
i opt to accept.
breaths.
remedy for dead sun
is blue.
swallowed whole
an eye
is gently fevered.
relapse to
again.

"Any view appears as a hole."
Barret Watten

[This message has been edited by pandonov (10-18-2003 02:23 AM).]

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

1 posted 2003-10-18 07:40 AM

well written,
and great form!
Love it

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-10-19 12:10 PM

Amazing imagery you continue to amaze

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-10-19 12:12 PM

Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2003-10-23 08:43 PM

i dont quite get it, but i like it

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-10-23 09:09 PM

amazing

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2003-10-24 12:00 PM

Heh,

This is damn good, m'dear.

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