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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2003-10-18 01:04 AM

Faraday Cage
By: Noah Eaton
10/17/03
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                                                   ...Floating in space
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                 ...swimming down the focal point...
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                                                  ...freed from this Faraday cage...

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                 ...pulled far from radar range...
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                                                 ...I'm aware nothing has changed...
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                 ...all the lights have gone double blind...
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                                                 ...just another spontanenous case...
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                 ...with no contact in sight...
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                                                ...Here's just hoping someone

...would pretend to care...
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                              ...but after a blank stare...

                           you'll realize,

I was never even
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there...
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                                                 ...When every other signal

...is sleight of hand anyhow...
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                                                 ...every little voice...
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                                ...feels like witchcraft...
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right now...
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                                                ...Half a false awakening later...
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                       ...still sitting in this stigmata chair...
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                                               ...I was pretending to be sleeping...
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                       ...hoping to see Jesus tuck me in...
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                                               ...hear the china katydids...
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                       ...humming acoustics out of UHF waves...
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                                               ...looking back on the little I've did...
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                       ...how little I saw of mother's lunar phase face...
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                                                ...Here's just hoping someone

...would pretend to care...
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                              ...but after a blank stare...

                           you'll realize,

I was never even
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there...
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                                                 ...When every other signal

...is sleight of hand anyhow...
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                                                 ...every little voice...
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                                ...feels like witchcraft...
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right now...
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                                                          ...Heard your voice through a satellite relay...
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                        ...I didn't have anything to say...
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                                                        ...hearing those hollow raudive voices...
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                       ...through this scratchy magnetic audio tape...
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                                                         ...Or did I fall asleep then...
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                       ...pretending to be asleep within a dream...
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                                                         ...still afraid to crawl out of this cradle...
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                      ...but I'm not sure why...
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                                                ...Here's just hoping someone

...would pretend to care...
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                              ...but after a blank stare...

                           you'll realize,

I was never even
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there...
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                                                 ...When every other signal

...is sleight of hand anyhow...
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                                                 ...every little voice...
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                                ...feels like witchcraft...
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right now...
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               ...I was never even there...
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never even there...
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never even there...
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never even there...
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never even there...
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never even there...
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never even there...
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never even there...
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Tramsmission disrupted,
losing feedback,
mission control, do you copy?

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-18-2003 01:11 AM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-10-18 01:18 AM

I liked this...

Here's just hoping someone would pretend to care
but after a blank stare..........
you'll realize
I was never even there.

Liked the sleight of hand and the little voice too,
it's pretty scary out there sometimes.

You go Noah~ hug!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-10-18 04:22 AM

and now I'm sending angel hugs to you

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2003-10-18 06:21 AM

Noah~

I likey!!

Susan

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2003-10-18 07:19 AM

and i was never there with you

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

5 posted 2003-10-18 07:27 AM

Noah, I can definitely relate...

*warm hugs*

~Tiers

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2003-10-18 08:49 AM

wonderful Noah...I love the repetition/chorus

check this line though:
"    ...looking back on the little I've
did..."

should be I did or I've done...  unless you want it that way ..just a suggestion

hugs
M

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

7 posted 2003-10-18 09:02 AM

Noah, all I can say is WOW!!

believe in what your heart feels...

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-10-18 10:05 AM

Noah, do you really know just how awesome your
writing is, my friend......just like you are!!!

Hugs to you

Ethel

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2003-10-18 10:12 AM

Noah,
Lost in space. Enjoyed the read.

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

10 posted 2003-10-18 10:13 AM

Sad song...sad to take it in.
Love to you,

Terri~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

11 posted 2003-10-19 11:31 AM

...looking back on the little I've did...

Noah, you've done much much more then you give yourself credit for. This was amazing...and you are incredibly talented. I would love to hear you sing, I'd be willing to bet, your voice is amazing!

Smiles and hugs...luv ya Lee J.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

12 posted 2003-10-19 11:57 AM

Very interesting words and format Noah.....Shows your crerative ability once again...

Eric

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

13 posted 2003-10-19 03:21 PM

Noah, your imagination, your views, your insight,and your heart always bring me warmth.Just close your eyes and my spirit will be there to tuck you in at night.I loved the form, the creativity, and the personal touch you gave this.

Crystal

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

14 posted 2003-10-19 03:49 PM

Noah...this is so artistic...it's powerful...passionate...lonely...beautiful. i'm falling in love. lol. God Bless and *hugs* from

- River

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

15 posted 2003-10-19 05:38 PM

enjoyed

(hugs)

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