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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
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Drive By To catch that precious One more glimpse Of you Doing the man things That you do With one look And a little wave I left my heart In your keeping It truly is joy Behind this weeping. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) One little glimpse is all you ever need when leaving it all behind, just have to avoid staring too long or you may get blinded by the sunglare! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you always write straight from the heart and we're all so happy to always hear your wonderful voice, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Suthern, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
hmmm.. while I enjoyed this I could also read into it a couple of different things almost at opposite ends of the spectrum when it comes to meaning. there is a pain buried in it that the words do not fully explain nor the honorable way you cry, hide. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Short sweet and to the point.  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
M'toe: For such a sight, I'd bear any glare. *G* Thank you! *S* Cpat: You mean ole wordy here left things unsaid? *G* Discerning eye, my friend... thank you! *S* Seymour: You're a dear, you know that? *S* Thank you! *S* |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Now what is a guy supposed to say when following behind..... Yanno what/who I am speaking of? Sheesh, now where was I? Oh yeah, Ruth this aches....stomp on his toe a few times and maybe he will be more respectful!!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
no no no ... dont just drive by... turn around and go back... tell em your delivering pizza  every time I talk to you its over too soon |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
...Mmmmmmm...we're blessed with a Laura poem....that's two poems from this Suthern lady in one day, one of each kind -- a record? And this one is a heart-stopper! Beautiful stuff! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I am thinking on this one, and probably will be for a bit, recalling a glimpse or two of my own. So enjoy thinking, Ms. Ruthie! Patricia |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now here, you made me think of divorced parents, "driving by" the school yard, watching their estranged child at play. My gosh girl, did we beg the muse? Keep it up! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Magnus: LOL... Yes... I know. LOL Not sure what a guy would say... think a gal would just enjoy the view. *G* Thank you so much! *S* JM: Now THERE's an idea I wish I'd had. *G* Thank you! *S* Ratleader: I needed to bring Laura out of hiding after depressing myself with that other one. *S* Thank you so much, my friend... I'm glad you liked. *S* Patricia: The briefest glimpse feeds a hungry soul for ages, doesn't it? *S* Thank you so much, kind lady. *S* Sunshine: I always like seeing another's view... thank you very much! *S* |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Whoa, what's this beauty doing down here? Up it goes into the Read Zone! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
"the man things" yeah...I remember watching those nice ending line too |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very nice glimpse into your world....thank you... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
It's surely worth the drive, isn't it? I do understand these heartfelt words, suthern one...  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Suthern ~ ~ May the bitter sweet longing lead to joyous having!  You deserve the best! Make sure that what you want is the best for you, my friend! Loves 'n hugs and wishes for the highest and best for you!  EA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Jamie: How kind you are... I thank you so very much! *S* PS: They're worth watching... in more than glimpses. *S* Thank you! *S* Nan: To borrow from PIP's resident moth... it's worth walking there on my lips. LOL Thank you so much, kind lady! *S* EA: You are so dear. *S* When I can't imagine better, only more... I know I've found more than I deserve. *S* Thank you, my friend. *S* |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
sounds like cpat read this right, more unsaid than said, and both just as provocative.....memories to be treasured on both accounts......sigh |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
aw....you really know how to feel on paper...it's so touching, thanks for the words i think that it's brainless to assume that making changes to your window's view will gain a new perspective. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
A good kind of drive by! Corinne |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
jellybeans: Provocative? Moi??? LOL Thank you very much, my friend. *S* Yes... they're treasured. *S* mytuesdaywishes: Thank YOU for such a kind response... I'm glad you liked! *S* Corinne: The only thing better would have been stopping. *S* Thank you! *S* |
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