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Ding Dong....
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Ding Dong.... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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Oh woe is me for I have lost the battle of good over evil I gave it everything I could even a brand new hood When that awful woman smashed it in And now the time has come to let it be done The satan van is dead There will be no taps or fancy farewell for I am broke and a loan still looms so I try to take it in stride as life resumes biting my tongue can anyone give me a ride? "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah... validate, validate, validate... one source of data is not enough if it is not confirmed and validated in numerous ways.. before you sing a dirge.. make sure the patient is dead... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Are suggesting, sir, that I don a pair of overalls and get out there and take a look? I think I will wait for the evil to dissipate. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
DING DONG THE VAN IS DEAD! wohooooo! new car? or bus rides? buses arent so bad, except when people try and talk to you, when you've just HAD ENOUGH of...people. so what did you do to him exactly, or did you pay someone to write it off? lol |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Hmmm...I used to have one of those tee shirts that suggest no one rides for free, but for you, sweetheart, I'll make an exception.  |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Sorry to hear the van is dead. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Perhaps your luck will now turn for the better! You just might win the lottery and you will be able to buy yourself a vehicle that is absolutely DIVINE! lol Now that Satan has bit the dust, he no longer has a hold on you!  I really am sorry to hear of your transportation problems, Susan.  Linda |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
Susan - what, my dear, might the karmic message be? I am sorry for your inconvenience, and any distress, but hey, if you ride a bike, you will appreciate your community in a totally new way. And if you take a bus, you will get to know those in your community better. None of that is a bad thing. good!!! write Peace, Joe |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, but riding the bus can be another subject for poetry. Have you tried putting oil in it?? LOL, sorry, that's what a friend asked me when my Diesel pickup died. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 hop on in lady! Let's hit the road! hang in there...better things are coming up! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Heck, who would've known it was going to turn out to be a Satan van anyway? Good writing and an apt description. Eric The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Maybe now your luck will turn to good and things will be much better. Crystal |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Welll.............. Since The Van Is Dead, lets give it a proper burial.We could have it compressed so we can carry it in a wagon of bright red. Bury a can of oil beside her and sing a song of farewell. How does that sound? See Ya Love Bon-Bon  |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
I can't tell you how many dead vans I've been through. Get a new battery and move on. Like your style. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ah, those three little words that everyone longs to hear.... "It's paid for" ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you one and all! Update: The satan van is sitting in the driveway and beside it is the S10 I bought..and its paid for!!! From mommy mini-van to bubba in the pickup! "if you won't let me fall for you |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
sorry I missed this Susan . . . ahh yes . . good for you and have had my share of possessed vehicles myself *smile* xxoo |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
This is so brilliant. I love your new pic |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Sue~Thanks for letting me know it isn't just me!!!  Brad~Thank you "if you won't let me fall for you then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you" ~Dido~ [This message has been edited by Susan Caldwell (10-21-2003 10:45 AM).] |
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