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Look with Different Eyes
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Look with Different Eyes |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112
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When your eyes looking, Past is the coloring seen, Look me at this now, Let look convince you somehow, I want more than friend, Visions old must come to end, Different eyes need looking. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There are many ways in which to view the world around us, thank you for sharing your vision, Lotus Breeze. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
May the eyes look differently and bring you what you desire.Well penned sweet lady.  Crystal |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112 |
Sunshine friend, many ways to see, but how make others to see, my dilemma. I just write best I can hope he see me as I want him to see. Your wish Crystal is my wish, thank you for words of friend |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
your writing is beautiful and it opens up my eyes to see what you see thank you that is a wonderful picture of you, nice to see your face |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lotus Breeze, this is beautiful. Thanks for sharing your view with us.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
the eyes of others are often blind to what we would have them see... to wrapped in the gauze of thier own "can't believe" sometimes we have to speak our hearts plainly.. and acceept the fact the other may indeed not want to see as we would have them. enjoyed this.. and enjoyed the wording of "Let look convince you somehow" I can read it with more than one possible emotion..which adds to the whole of the piece for me. |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112 |
~See what I see, is lonely at time, when know he sits alone and doesn’t visit me. I happy you like my photo, it’s a little old yet looks like me ~Ethel you kind to read and say nice things of my poem ~His eyes, so gentle at times, look no enough time to me. You give great compliment |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this Lotus...silky...James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lotus Breeze where are you...please post some new poetry...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
enjoyed this...loved your critique message...it's as beautiful as your thoughts... jwesley |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112 |
All very kind to like my poetry, James I write what words I can yet I am not as much a writer as some here. Hard to get thoughts on page. All so kind to me make me happy. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
When my eyes go looking to see, If towards the blue mountains or sea, I can’t help the flow of memory Or the rush of possibility Enjoyed your poem, I agree with James, you need to write more. Gloom |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May his eyes and heart open wide to both your inner and outer beauty...  ~ Lovely as a Lotus Breeze, Earth Angel |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Lovely poem. Sometimes men are a little dense though. Wack him upside the head with a frying pan...he'll probably see the light a lot quicker. (Smiles!) Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112 |
The teacher give me poem response, I so happy you write to me poem that I try write more. Sweet Earth Angel give sweet reply I not use fry pan but poem and sweetness, seems better choice |
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