Sultry Eyes---written with Poemcrazy Tom---repost

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Open Poetry #29

Sultry Eyes---written with Poemcrazy Tom---repost

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2003-10-17 10:32 AM

It started with a look....the one that draws me across the room.

Your lips, pouting, sensual.
I feel your fire, warmth, desire.
as eyes lock.

It's hard to decide
if it's your lips, or your eyes,
that hypnotize.

The room goes dark,
but for the beacon of beckoning lips,
and the sounding of sultry eyes.

I draw closer
mesmerized by the shape
tantalized by the colour.

Drawn deeper, then deeper still
By what I see reflected by the stars
Glowing brighter than the moon.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2003-10-17 10:43 AM

I had to keep coming back to this one because the screen kept melting with the heat of the passion.

Still smoking now!!

Promise you won't be good Paula!!

Sexy stuff!

Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

2 posted 2003-10-17 10:46 AM

I have to agree.With was filled with fire and passion.An awesome write.

Crystal

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2003-10-21 04:19 AM

Enjoyed...James

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