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ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

0 posted 2003-10-17 06:45 AM

Just a little love ditty I wrote....Maybe it would work with the right music?? This sappy little tune I have in mind.....
Show You Love Again

I know you still love him,
I can tell where your mind dwells
It's over, your heart can't win
Your soul's wrapped up in hell.
But you won't deal with the truth,
He left with your best friend
Your world's turned heavy blue
but I wish you'd let me in

Chorus:
I can crowd out those memories of him,
I just need you in my arms,
To show you love again
I can be the sun in your mind
When your thoughts grow dim.
I just need you in my arms
To show you love again.

I know broken hearts will mend,
Cause I've watched them come around
So realize you can start again
Please girl don't shut me out
I need to show you there's an us
There's a new joy we can share
If you let me gain your trust
You'll find my open arms there

Bridge:
You always stir my hopeful side
When I see you out around
But I know you're hiding deep inside
In a place where hearts break down

Chorus:
I can crowd out those memories of him,
I just need you in my arms,
To show you love again
I can be the sun in your mind
When your thoughts grow dim.
I just need you in my arms
To show you love again

Maybe I should have this as a guy that was in love with her before and wants her back....I dunno??

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[This message has been edited by ethome (10-17-2003 07:46 AM).]

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2003-10-17 07:11 AM

Eric, and I would have gladly taken you up on that if someone hadn't beaten you to it! lol

--and my ex did leave with my "friend"!

I can imagine the melody being just as soul-touching as the lyrics are.

Linda

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2003-10-17 07:40 AM

Eric this was a great love song!

~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2003-10-17 07:47 AM

Thanks Earth and ARH I sure appreciate the read and the response.

Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2003-10-17 07:59 AM

Eric,
It sets right and can go either way.
A real good write.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2003-10-17 09:51 AM

Bridge:
You always stir my hopeful side
When I see you out around
But I know you're hiding deep inside
In a place where hearts break down

I love the bridge..guess I don't believe in getting him/her back again.

M

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

6 posted 2003-10-17 11:40 AM

This is great.I can hear the music in my head and it blends beautifully with your words.

Crystal

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