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Open Poetry #29

Tweaking

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

0 posted 2003-10-14 08:29 PM

Here a tweak
there a tweak
everywhere a tweak tweak

Tweaking here,tweaking there
till you're all tweaked out,
and your words are written

like those of old masters.

For then you know the poem
is complete.

PsychoticBunni
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis

1 posted 2003-10-14 08:35 PM

hehe. tweak is a funny word. but seriously, you really do have to tweak writing so much it gets annoying. Sometimes i just can't stand it.

Meg

Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!"

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2003-10-14 09:05 PM

*s..I have been known to tweak a little here and tweak a little there ...

smiling
M

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-10-14 09:14 PM

LOL...I tweak my poems so much before I post
it's a wonder there's anything left.

Cute write....much enjoyed the smiles.
~Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

4 posted 2003-10-15 08:35 PM

Thank-you for the nice comments.
No poem is complete until it is tweaked.

:-)

Thank-you again

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