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Open Poetry #29

Sleep as well as i

swinging2bbvd
Junior Member

since 2003-10-02

Posts 14

0 posted 2003-10-14 04:29 PM

this is a painful poem i wrote after breaking up with my first true love. we had broke up just before she moved away to college and i never stoped caring for her. when she returned for the summer we agreed to be friends, but to this day, 2 and a half years later, she is the only one i can honestly say i will love till the end of time.

Chandra, Sleep as Well as I
Each new night I welcome without regret
I see the beauty in every new sunset
Even as the icy air rolls in
I know my blood won't run thin
My swollen heart will keep me warm
Through what would be another sullen storm
Your truly in my arms tonight
I'll feel your form and hold you tight
And I know as I go into my sleep
It's our renewal of love that I weep
No more tears of lonely pain
The light you shine shows again
Though through great gaps we embrace
Knowing you still love me erases this space

Ronald J Walsh

PsychoticBunni
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis

1 posted 2003-10-14 09:13 PM

oh my gosh. wow. such pain. lean on your friends. write more beautiful poetry like this.

Meg

Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!"

eminor_angel
Member

since 2003-05-22

Posts 323
Canada

2 posted 2003-10-14 10:22 PM

i hope things work out . . .

one grammar thing, prolly a typo

"Your truly in my arms tonight"

should be "You're"

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