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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2003-10-13 11:14 PM

Tomorrow has no shape
and there’s nothing here to know
and since time cannot escape
there’s but love for us to grow.
I love you so much
and there’s no rain up in the sky
unless it's in your eyes-
tonight we cry.
Tomorrow but to die,
            so let’s sleep until we lie
     in each others arms we can be again.
Tomorrow is a blend
of todays that never end
until tomorrow is a glimmer in your eye.
Tomorrow is a twist
        in an old familiar song-
“Tomorrow you will die”
How could tomorrow be so wrong?
Tomorrow, I need you
to come with me tonight
Tomorrow, you don't seem so hard to write.

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (10-13-2003 11:26 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-10-13 11:18 PM

I loved this poem. The words were so beautiful.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-10-14 06:39 AM

Better than the song...
Thank you, Walt!

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2003-10-14 07:50 AM

It's only a day away.... Nice one, walty...

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

4 posted 2003-10-14 08:10 AM

This had a nice flow and sings like a song...

nicely done...

regards
sudhir

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

5 posted 2003-10-14 08:11 AM

heheh I honestly wasnt thinking about lil orphan Annie at all and I love that song. Got it on my Ipod even.

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

6 posted 2003-10-14 09:38 AM

Ahoy, Skipper...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2003-10-14 09:45 AM

wayoutwalt,
A very nice write, enjoyed.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2003-10-14 10:00 AM

nice read

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2003-10-14 10:35 AM

Nicely done Walt.
Good to read you here again!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

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