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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-10-09 07:41 AM

Frustration

he said the word
for the day
was frustration
and I wanted to
be able to describe it
to him as if
he could feel it
like the heavy wings
of oily midnight
crying black birds
clamoring in air
rushing the wind
of a cloudless sky
pressing much too close
covering the sun
screaming across thick
emptiness echoing sound
then I got caught
in it’s breath
and I wondered
where was it
I had heard it before
that sheer noted
noise that it had
made my mind clink
on broken glass
from yesterday’s windows
listening to the
raven’s song of
lullaby-ed loneliness
a composition from
roaring disturbance
then I annoyed
clapped my hands
as loud as I could
and they went scattering
to sit on lines
like me
waiting

"wish your room had room for two" John Mayer

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-10-09 07:44 AM

1slick_lady
That is a slick poem, enjoyed.

allamericanjoe
Member

since 2003-10-02

Posts 116
Iredell county, NC

2 posted 2003-10-09 07:51 AM

How do you come up with such poetry, and so quickly? You are always a wonderful read.

"The greatest gift a father can give to his daughter is to love her mother."

alisa
Member

since 2003-08-20

Posts 70
Florida

3 posted 2003-10-10 01:21 PM

"How do you come up with such poetry, and so quickly? You are always a wonderful read"

yes, i am always amazed at you and your work...

Darren
Junior Member

since 2003-09-30

Posts 30

4 posted 2003-10-10 02:22 PM

She's certainly connected to some poetic force, and it's energy flows right through her.

You're blessed Helen. And we as your readers and fans are thankful for it.

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

5 posted 2003-10-10 02:49 PM

WOW...This sounds like no fun. :'(

Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-10-10 09:36 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Let's just see this trivial talk-show host attempt to define frustration, now THERE's something, as he probably can't do so as well as you! (sad sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, this is pounding, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2003-10-14 08:26 AM

Yes, frustration....my middle name lately, and boy do I wish I'd written this poem to describe it.

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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2003-10-14 10:03 AM

enjoyed

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