Open Poetry #29 |
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Silver Moon Chariot |
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Alwye
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Silver moon-chariot sweeping across the sky… you revel in the same vision as I- Luna, cast your shimmered caress upon him… liquid light lingering, granting every whim. Lay down your softest grace, my iridescent queen… a blanket of white for him underneath to dream. Lady of the sky, let him feel me when I am afar… and discover all the love I’ve laced among the evening stars. Silver moon-chariot sweeping across the sky.. please give him my soul as you fly by. ~*Krista Lee Knutson*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
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Luna, cast your shimmered caress upon him… liquid light lingering, granting every whim. ==================== HEY YOU!!!!!!!!!!!! ![]() did ya know I just love alliterations and assonance?? ![]() Love the imagery in this too... SO good to read you again Krista-girle..tis been far too long since you wafted our way. ![]() "Nature's first green is gold, |
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Kaz Junior Member
since 2003-10-12
Posts 26 |
That was so beautiful. ![]() |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Silver moon-chariot sweeping across the sky.. please give him my soul as you fly by. Now, that is why I have missed your work so much - this was absolutely lovely Krista. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Very nicely conveyed! Thanks for posting it. Sadelite |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Krista...The moon does make magic happen...so do words. ![]() |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A silvery treat... Alwye's a pleasure... Nice to see you my friend... ![]() |
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Cerenity'sLine Junior Member
since 2003-08-26
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Hi Alwye, Very lovely, so much enjoyed, Cerenity |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lady of the sky, let him feel me when I am afar… and discover all the love I’ve laced among the evening stars. ~*~ Yes! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Wonderful!! Do more? Susan |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Alwye All of the above and more. Enjoyed |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thanks for all the nice words everyone. It feels good to be back and to be writing poetry again...it's been a while since I've had this much creative energy. Thanks again for all the support, you guys are wonderful. ![]() ~*Krista Lee Knutson*~ |
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