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Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

0 posted 2003-10-13 11:54 AM

Her ideas bleed through pages
making scribbles on the backside.
To read what’s there, one must
view with blurred eyes,

then figures float off paper,
rising in bumps and lumps
of partially fleshed-out fantasies.
There, see? A hole has been scratched,

formed by perception.
Her story isn’t of a huntress
as claimed in the beginning.
She has hidden her kills

and now she’s Running Deer,
spooked, with an unsteady gait.

Her trail is without territory,
flitting from forests to the shore,
to gather her ending together
into something akin to forever.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-10-13 12:13 PM

Corinne
Well done and understandable.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-10-13 01:36 PM

Stunning piece Corinne, always look forward to your words

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-10-13 07:16 PM

Her trail is without territory,
flitting from forests to the shore,
to gather her ending together
into something akin to forever.

~*~

I've been feeling unsettled lately,
and this fits my feeling very well.
Thank you Corinne. You always come
in when I need you.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2003-10-13 07:59 PM

Corinne~
I can't quote a fvorite passage, as it is all sooooo good~

You are a remarkable writer~
ALWAYS I enjoy you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

5 posted 2003-10-13 08:42 PM

Very nice Core.

Don't know why, but this is particularly fine:
"Her story isn’t of a huntress
as claimed in the beginning.
She has hidden her kills"

Ed

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

6 posted 2003-10-13 09:17 PM

Nice, m'friend...

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

7 posted 2003-10-13 09:20 PM

A fine piece of poetry, I especially enjoyed the first verse...it just flowed off the tongue. Exellent writing!!

~*Krista Lee Knutson*~

We are, each of us angels with only one wing; and we can only fly by embracing one another.
--Luciano De Crescenzo

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2003-10-13 09:24 PM

What a magical write.
I'm keeping this one.

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