Open Poetry #29 |
Was it love or lusty romance? (country-blues song lyrics) |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Was it love or lusty romance that made you dance that dance? the one that kept you grounded inside a hopeless lover's trance? while your 'partner' did the two step never intending to dosey-doh, did he catch you in a love trap but now says he wants no more? were you a twistin and a shoutin, while now you're just a poutin? and the venom is a spoutin all over a blue dance floor? was it love or lusty romance that made you dance that dance? the one that kept you grounded inside a hopeless lover's trance? Don't blame the poor musician or the lyrics on his page, just chock it up to experience before your anger turns to rage, for the song of LOVE is too precious to be buried in the dirt, and it doesn't pay to wallow even when your heart's been hurt. Was it love or lusty romance that made you dance that dance? the one that kept you grounded inside a hopeless lover's trance? [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (10-13-2003 10:37 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wow, your in great form this morning missy....lovely write and play on words....has me smiling, and the rhyme was simply supurb. Thank you for sharing |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks Lee J. Somehow I think it should have a country-blues tune behind it. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Don't blame the poor musician or the lyrics on his page ..... exactly... nice write, my friend... regards sudhir |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sudhir, thanks for reading and picking out a line! it's always a treat to have a visit from you |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I agree it does have a country-blues tune behind it. (funny, I am not keen on country music). Sometimes we get so eager for love and acceptance we misread the signs... Very well done Kacy!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks, Susan! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is a good country song, I can see me dancing to it. Come to think of it, I think I have danced to this one-and he two-stepped right out the door. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, I have this feeling there are many of us who have danced to this tune. Thanks for the reply! |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
an instant classic! (smiling here) well done Kacy! |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Living can be hell when one's just a bug on the windshield of love... Yee Haw!!! Live like it's your last day... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kacy? you are brilliant . . . Don't blame the poor musician or the lyrics on his page, just chock it up to experience before your anger turns to rage, for the song of LOVE is too precious to be buried in the dirt, and it doesn't pay to wallow even when your heart's been hurt. very much so and uhhh . . . put this to music . . . I think you got something here *smile* xxoo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Edder, now that's a very generous reply! Ray, LOL, that's definitely not the way I'd want to end an affair! Sue, wanna go on tour? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I think the first attractions are lust...love would come later...if both parties are willing...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I loved this from the title through the last word... well done, lady! LOL |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
James, I gathered as much, from some of your writes. LOL, but what usually happens is lust subsides before love kicks in. Thanks, sweet suthern songbird! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
sure Kacy but what to call ourselves? hmm . . . thinking here . . . (a feat in itself) Ok but I am NOT singing . . . |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ok, so does that mean you'll hum bok bok bok bok bok? LOL |
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