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scorpio
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0 posted 2003-09-22 07:36 PM



Rainy Days and Mondays

Rain drops on the roof.
You lying beside me close.
Let it rain all day.


believe in what your heart feels...

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-09-22 07:39 PM


rainy days and nights wow,,,

great write expressed,,,

                                       

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-09-22 08:10 PM


love it..and
Rainy Days 'N Mondays is my business name
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mytuesdaywishes
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3 posted 2003-09-22 08:16 PM


keep it short, keep it sweet, keep it real. you know just what you're doing. wonderful.

and even when everything was wrong, and we were mad at the world, it was still beautiful.

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-09-22 08:30 PM



Sounds like my kinda day! Loved this little beauty!

Now I know what you have been up to!


EA

scorpio
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5 posted 2003-09-22 08:35 PM


Thank you QjQ for reading and commenting..

I'm glad you  enjoyed it< Nakdthoughts...interesting business card..

Mytuesdaywishes, thank you...I'm trying to master the senyru..and I appreciate your support..

believe in what your heart feels...

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6 posted 2003-09-22 08:47 PM



Spending days with you ~
Are always extra special
Even when it rains.

A Romantic Heart
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7 posted 2003-09-22 08:53 PM


Such a powerful punch in a short package of words!
It is raining here too and I have also written a rainy poem tonight!

Great thoughts~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

scorpio
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8 posted 2003-09-22 08:54 PM


Linda, thank you...the best way to spend a rainy day..

Come count rain drops with me, Nancy..

believe in what your heart feels...

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9 posted 2003-09-22 09:15 PM


scorpio - I'll bring the popcorn!!
This is lovely and inviting. Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore



    

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10 posted 2003-09-22 09:17 PM




(smiles) Rainy days and Mondays could never get you down when you have someone special there with you! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

scorpio
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11 posted 2003-09-22 09:29 PM


ARH, thank you...your comments are appreciated..and I enjoyed your poem too..

Chris, popcorn would be great...thank you for dropping in..

Thank you< Noah...I always look forward to your comments..

believe in what your heart feels...

Chrissypooh
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12 posted 2003-09-22 10:08 PM


Enjoyed the write.

scorpio
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13 posted 2003-09-22 10:11 PM


Thank you so much Chrissy..

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
14 posted 2003-09-23 08:35 AM




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15 posted 2003-09-23 09:26 AM


ah.. glad Nancy bumped this was back up..I missed it...

Scorp... well done my friend. You set in play the imagination and feelings associated with it in just a few well chosen words...

now... do it again..



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16 posted 2003-09-23 09:27 AM


nice read
Sunshine
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17 posted 2003-09-23 09:28 AM



Now, where did this come from?
You've been away much too long,
m'friend ~ welcome home!

Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 2003-09-23 09:29 AM


scorpio
Well done, enjoyed the read

scorpio
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19 posted 2003-09-23 01:02 PM


Nancy..thanks for the bump..

Thank you, Ron, for your encouragement and support..

Vandana..glad you enjoyed..

Karilea, thank you...I wasn't really away... my muse took a vacation...she's back..

Sy, thank your for the "well done"...much appreciated my friend..

believe in what your heart feels...

JamesMichael
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20 posted 2004-08-11 07:40 PM


Fantastic...and all night...James
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