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GypsyGirl
Junior Member

since 2003-09-21

Posts 29

0 posted 2003-09-22 07:33 PM

Flutterly Sensation

In my heart I feel
A flutterly sensation
As you hold me close
Caressing me tenderly
Passion continues to grow
9-22-03

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2003-09-22 07:35 PM

GypsyGirl - at times those close caresses will do that...

BC

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-09-22 07:35 PM

wow terrific penning,,,

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2003-09-22 07:35 PM

nice

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2003-09-22 07:55 PM

welcome, GypsyGirl.
Hope you enjoy your flutter time at Pips.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2003-09-22 08:05 PM

I love that "flutterly sensation"!

EA

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2003-09-22 09:28 PM

GypsyGirl~
You are a talented poetess~
This is perfect form and so very touching~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-09-22 10:06 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may butterflies always sweetly flutter in your heart and sparrows sing joyously of true love for you forever, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet GypsyGirl, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2003-09-23 07:54 PM

It is a wonderful sensation,
to flutter again and again, if you're lucky!

Liked this a lot~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

9 posted 2003-09-23 09:05 PM

Lovely !!
hugs, Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

10 posted 2003-09-23 11:27 PM

Ooh, I wanna!

Nicely spoken, this little poem....

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vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

11 posted 2003-10-03 09:53 PM

Just lovely, GypsyGirl. I enjoyed this.
Hugs,
~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

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*Flutterly Sensation*In my heart I feelA flutterly sensationAs you hold me closeCaressing me tenderlyPassion continues to grow9-22-03

Flutterly Sensation

In my heart I feel
A flutterly sensation
As you hold me close
Caressing me tenderly
Passion continues to grow
9-22-03