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Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

0 posted 2003-10-11 12:45 PM

On walk with you
down meadow's lane
to serenade
of lark's refrain

Tis true my heart
did skip a beat
when in chance
our eyes did meet

To find myself
in love's embrace
the play of light
upon your face

Halo bound
and tied with lace
shadows dance
to dreamer's pace

Still this heart
my breath deny
on angel's wings
you surely fly

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2003-10-11 12:49 PM

Your words let me walk with you through tender emotions that felt good in the reading. Well done.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2003-10-11 10:21 PM

On walk with you
down meadow's lane
to serenade
of lark's refrain

I gotta love that verse~

You write so nice Edder,
it's a pleasure strolling through your words.

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

3 posted 2003-10-11 10:26 PM

'Tis a feeling I know well sir. And one you express to perfection. Thank you for bringing it here.

~~J

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2003-10-11 10:48 PM

So tender and sweet..

You write both so well!

Susan

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

5 posted 2003-10-11 11:43 PM

Startime- once again, thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed.

Lori-glad you enjoyed the stroll, so nice to see you here.

James- you are much too kind, I thank you.

Susan- why thank you, dear! you are really too good to me.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2003-10-12 05:23 PM

on angel's wings
you surely fly

To be thought of so... this is just beautiful. *S*

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

7 posted 2003-10-13 12:28 PM

Suthern- thank you, your kind words are most appreciated.

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

8 posted 2003-10-13 10:02 AM

Wonderful, Eddles.

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

9 posted 2003-10-13 11:39 AM

This is lovely, Edder - I enjoyed muchly...

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

10 posted 2004-07-08 01:26 AM

wow, i am at loss for words. very romantic

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

11 posted 2004-07-08 01:39 AM

opps didnt mean to post this again

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

12 posted 2004-07-08 03:01 AM

I like this one. Very nice write

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