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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers 
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A vivacious young lady I noticed her right away She seemed so cheerful Helped me all the way There were times when She was really down I wish I could do something To take away her frown When I feel really bad She would listen to me Her gaze may seem far away Well, at least she heard me Though it really seems like We wallow in self-pity There must be an avenue for us To vent our agony Now she decides to leave This inhumane madhouse It feels like a sparkle In my life has been doused A dull ache twitches in my heart At the very thought Yet somehow I feel glad Never again will she feel cross _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
thank you for your poem -arthur |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mon Cherie Enjoyed the read. |
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allamericanjoe Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 116Iredell county, NC |
Very much enjoyed this read. Another "sparkle" will come!  "The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time" ~James taylor~ |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Thanks, y'all... Yeah, another sparkle will come. Juz gotta hang in there  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i think your poems are getting better. there seems to be some kind of flow to them. keep up the good work! am i not the sparkle that still remains in your life? haha!  |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
I had an inkling about getting this deleted, but decided that I'll leave it in here anyway. Although the sentiments I first felt when I wrote this no longer exists, it's still my hard work and brain juices used in composing this piece. :P _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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