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maximillian
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0 posted 2003-10-11 10:41 AM


MAGICAL SCIENCE

Man perceived the world was flat,
Others Agreed
Man perceived the world was round,
Others Agreed
Man perceived the world span on its axis,
Others Agreed
Man perceived the Sun revolved around the Earth,
Others Agreed
It took a single lover to turn the world upside down,
One Grieved
Some said the science of our World laid in the magic of love,
I opened my eyes.


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1 posted 2003-10-11 10:43 AM


very cool write!
enjoyed it much

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2 posted 2003-10-11 01:06 PM


This is wonderful!
Very much enjoyed the read.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

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3 posted 2003-10-11 01:11 PM


BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!! I love it...How very wonderfully you put it. Stunning.

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4 posted 2003-10-11 01:16 PM


I really like this....
it's so true!!  
Hugs  
Ethel

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5 posted 2003-10-11 01:46 PM


Excellent.  I think you solved the puzzle
with this one.

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6 posted 2003-10-11 02:55 PM




(sigh) Even if all these hypotheses are false, it won't change a thing for love as far as I'm concerned! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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7 posted 2003-10-12 12:24 PM


This is true!   You'd think it'd physically impossible for a single person to turn a world upside down or a heart inside out.  Enjoyed your write, especially your contrasts.

                                Sadelite

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8 posted 2003-10-12 08:49 AM


Very interesting analogies, maximillan...
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9 posted 2003-11-08 02:35 PM


Maximillian
   I just happened to visit my own library and saw this unattended.   As this is a night for eclipse, night of wonderment, I thought I'd pop it to the top, for another go
round.        
                       Sadelite

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