Open Poetry #29 |
Magical Science |
maximillian Junior Member
since 2003-09-13
Posts 23 |
MAGICAL SCIENCE Man perceived the world was flat, Others Agreed Man perceived the world was round, Others Agreed Man perceived the world span on its axis, Others Agreed Man perceived the Sun revolved around the Earth, Others Agreed It took a single lover to turn the world upside down, One Grieved Some said the science of our World laid in the magic of love, I opened my eyes. [This message has been edited by maximillian (10-11-2003 10:41 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
very cool write! enjoyed it much |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is wonderful! Very much enjoyed the read. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!! I love it...How very wonderfully you put it. Stunning. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I really like this.... it's so true!! Hugs Ethel |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent. I think you solved the puzzle with this one. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Even if all these hypotheses are false, it won't change a thing for love as far as I'm concerned! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
This is true! You'd think it'd physically impossible for a single person to turn a world upside down or a heart inside out. Enjoyed your write, especially your contrasts. Sadelite |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very interesting analogies, maximillan... |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Maximillian I just happened to visit my own library and saw this unattended. As this is a night for eclipse, night of wonderment, I thought I'd pop it to the top, for another go round. Sadelite |
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