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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
I'm not sure that this is done, it doesn't feel like it. Just random ramblings through the canyons of my mind. Just know that with the mental twists caused by alcoholism and addictions, my freaking mind is out to get me, sober or not. I am, but my mind wants me back off of the Path. My mind loves a rhyme It loves beauty it defines I look forward to each season Poetry flows without reason My grandchildren love me think no one’s above me Little do they know about… My life running riot and rout Or life’s twisted mysteries Or Grandpa’s mystical twisteries Zen Christian mystic meditating Soul on fire thoughts of contemplating Or his mental vagrancy Or his moral vacancy Seeking higher ground Turning once it’s found Living for the moment Thoughtless of pain I foment Matters not as life is kind I am loved by all but my mind © Copyright 2003 Joseph D. Carreno II Peace, Joe |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Our past actions love to haunt us, don't they? But when we let them go... we breathe a little easier. We are always hardest on ourselves... but I see you're ready to forgive yourself... but you won't, because you think you'll slip backwards. Not with those grandkids watching... nope...you won't.  |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Wellll, that's just about as articulate as inarticulation can get! I confess I started reading because of the title, knowing how well you write -- and as usual, stayed for the pleasure. |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
This was good,would sound good done as a song,got good timing. I liked the content too,having have survived a couple of addictions reminds me that the cure is really far easier than the alternative. Live like it's your last day... |
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Marty Baird Member
since 2003-09-20
Posts 90Georgia, U.S. |
Your words are a gift that needs to be given. Great job keep on giving  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Joe, I am certainly glad you joined us, I likey what you write! Susan "if you won't let me fall for you |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
Sunshine ~ you're right about the grandkiddies and the backward slippin', thanks for the r n r JAF ~ thank you kindly bb ~ let us trudge the road of happy destiny Marty ~ thank you very much. I do hope that what I write touches others where they live, not so much in the head. Peace Peace, Joe |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Joe...I liked reading the path of your mind...understand myself where you have been. And if you want to join me...being addicted to poetry is a good thing!  |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
yup Martie, I am still an addict, though my obsession is to write. Being a former mental health professional, I still have that codependent angst to heal others. Maybe I can affect that through my writings. thank you for you comments. |
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