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When You Brought Flowers |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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petals' silken touch life's open invitation orchid's graphic tongue ©2003 by icebox |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
ooooo, sounds like you had a good offer there! Or thoughts of one, anyway... !K! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Okay maybe I'm completely off but i like the image this produces grins |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ahh...very, Very good! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I keep a collection of orchids myself... They've wondrous blooms... This is a lovely haiku, ice...  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox...I have found that flowers are used to say many things, most of them based on love. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ice, you have a way with words that is quite good....imagining what you have shown me, very nice. |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
A bit specific for a haiku, I'd think... it could have done without the word "life." But maybe that's just my own response. Otherwise, I like how the title hints at the context of the poem, and sets a foundation for the imagery in the reader's imagination. Well done, Icebox... Parasite Faith is a fine invention |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your writing is always inviting~ icebox~ |
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