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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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I miss the beats of when never thinking of now just letting it happen Yesterday I barely remember thinking back only aches the way it happened You can never save it the way you created it Nuclear war of words The people you most want to stay go and you make the most of those who survived We had a sunday kind of love it so quicky passed to monday The things you wait so long for pass |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
morning .... or actually... afternoon for you about now... anyway..lol.. now that I have confused myself with time zones and proper salutations for greeting someone halfway around the world...I have forgotten what I was going to say abot the poem..and for a moment I thought what it was I was going to say to be insightful.. now all that comes out is...oh..yeah..I liked it... lol  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"We had a sunday kind of love it so quicky passed to monday The things you wait so long for pass" Very very nicely penned...much enjoyed! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
and I can't believe this was almost on the second page! back to the top with yeh! What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh gemma~ Yesterday I barely remember thinking back only aches the way it happened You can never save it the way you created it You moved me beyond words... Happy Birthday little lady~ |
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