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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2003-10-10 05:06 PM

Stir the soul of a mortal man,
beyond the river’s walk.
Where daisies paint the meadow’s glen
and silent is the stalk.

As flowers push the heaven’s high,
as stars become alive.
Where maidens walk and softly sigh
for places they will thrive.

Silent now in the heavens dark
before the moon does crest.
Before the loon does call the lark
in hollows where they rest.

For from the mighty river’s flow
into the canyon deep.
A current churns the earth below
where history does sleep.

And man shall come to find the bones
of ancient beasts that walked
upon the land among the stones
as others softly stalked.

PsychoticBunni
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis

1 posted 2003-10-10 05:10 PM

wow. it gives a very echo to the seat where love is throned. shakespeare. it is moving and makes me think.

Meg

Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!"

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

2 posted 2003-10-10 05:12 PM

How the words seem to have flowed effortlessly from your pen. Beautifully written, Magnus. Definitely one to keep.

~Tier

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2003-10-10 05:27 PM

For from the mighty river’s flow
into the canyon deep.
A current churns the earth below
where history does sleep.
yes sir... truths here indeed...

nicely done..and smooth and effortless to read as always....

good stuff man...
well...for an old fart like you anyway..

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2003-10-10 05:43 PM

what happen you fall asleep??? figured that poke would get a comment out of you.. or at least a grumble... lol

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2003-10-10 07:02 PM

Oh, I am so used to senility, age, sex....
shhhhh..... don't mention that one....
comments...that you would have to work double
hard to get a grumble from me......

Thanx Ron, I was away at Staples getting
some more RAM for my wife's comp.....itsa
screamin now!!!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-10-10 08:59 PM

(sigh) .....and well before that, one may find the secrets and relics of the existance of life in the beginning, from the whole Master Creation! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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