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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2003-10-10 11:18 AM

Sitting in silent meditation.

Incense of jasmine attempts to fill
the empty air spaces between us.

I sense your reluctance
to reach out and grasp
the vital essence of me.

Or is it my own
reflection I see?

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2003-10-10 11:29 AM

Kacy I doubt it is your reflection hon,
but I did enjoy the way you used the entire poem to arrive at the question...
very well done gal.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-10-10 11:30 AM

Wonderful Kacy!!
Very much enjoyed the read.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2003-10-10 11:32 AM

Donna, smiling at you for your constant tenderness.
Nancy, thanks dear lady, so happy to have a visit from you.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2003-10-10 11:51 AM

Midnitesun
Good question, enjoyed.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-10-10 11:57 AM

Thanks for your time and reply, Sy.
Now, if only I had the answer to this riddle, perhaps the time spent on my derriere would be less?

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

6 posted 2003-10-10 12:54 PM

Excellent! Enjoyed this little question very much! Very well done. Can't wait to see more.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

7 posted 2003-10-10 12:54 PM

The answer will come in time, don't force it.You are an talented poetess.

Crystal

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2003-10-10 04:44 PM

Kacy, you do have a way with words that
leaves one in thought... Nicely done.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2003-10-10 08:41 PM

(smiles) Oh Kacy, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this is deeply contemplative and I think setting really brings the balance into focus! (big hugggsssssss) May the fortune always be that you seek, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-10-2003 08:42 PM).]

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