Open Poetry #29 |
Ringo's Girl |
Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
hey all... My 9 y/o daughter decided she was a poet like the old man and asked me to put this on here... Enjoy the next generation... MOULDY MEAT I went to the cafeteria and slipped on some mouldy lunch meat I didn't land on my feet Where's my friend Devon I think I'm in heaven Because of all that mouldy lunch meat Here's her cousin's work /pip/Forum82/HTML/001191.html [This message has been edited by Ringo (10-10-2003 11:50 AM).] |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
hehehe the poetic gears already working... Love, Terri~ Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My goodness gracious! That's so outrageous! It made me giggle, And tummy jiggle! & Earth Angel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahh and here lies the other . . . *two smiles for me today* I left a reply for the both of you in the first post xxoo |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Yep she's got the talent.Look out world there's two with an awesome spirit. Crystal |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What an adorable write! And, you're only 9 years old!! We always love having young writers join us.. ask your dad about signing up and posting here! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Ringo, this is absolutely wonderful, sweet friend, I am so happy your daughter is also writing as she is destined to be a future shining star here as she has a gorgeous voice to share just like you! (big hugggsssssss) Uggghhhhh, who can stand that moldly old lunch meat, yay, now I'm off skipping on recess to read her cousin's poem, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ringo, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Talent runs in your family...sign her up!! Pip need to look to the future.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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PsychoticBunni Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 162Mythical Atlantis |
yup. get ur daughter on here cuz i could use a laugh like that again. tell her she's got fans. Meg Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I was interrupted before I could respond to this, Ringo...kudos to this young one as well. Now I'm REALLY looking forward to a tri-et! |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Thanks guys, to all who replied... the girls are both completely over the moon that they got a chance to see their writes on the internet, and that people responded to them. There are 2 little girls who are sleeping with smiles tonight. BTW, I did get them both accounts, because they almost demanded one (lol ) and they immediately wrote 4 more each... My daughter is stottbear94 and my niece is sportgirl94. Thanks again. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Man, this sounds like the same cafeteria we had when I was (way) back in grade school... And that was so long ago, they didn’t even have a History class yet? It sounds like the same lunch meat too... Probably still left over from the 60’s! A few bites, and you really did feel like you had just died! Ahhh, school lunches... You gotta love’em... “Hey, what’s that?” “Believe me, you don’t want to know...” “!” Hey, what do you want for 35 cents! A Happy Meal? “Mouldy Meat” huh? Hey Bradly, your daughter’s a genius! Sign her up, she’s adorable! Richy |
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