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A simple smile
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A simple smile |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Lie in peaceful slumber drifting off to dream ride a shooting star bask in Luna's beam know I'm thinking of you across the lonely miles a weary soul restored by a simple *smile* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful! This piece flows so gently down the page. Much enjoyed the read. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done Edder... nicely done indeed! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When it comes from the right person, that simple smile carries magical remedies for all that ails you. *S* |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Nancy- thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed. Ron- a privilege to have you here, sir. Thank you for reading. Suthern- indeed it does, and i'm quite sure she doesn't know how much I needed it at the time. |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
Beautiful! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love the peaceful easy feeling in this. Ya made me smile Edder~  Says so much in so few words. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 love this write, m'friend |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is beautifully magical, sweet friend, a smile is conagious and somehow I know God sent an angel to send your loves smile to you! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Edder, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Endless- Thank you much! Lori- If that's the case...mission accomplished Kacy- Thanks for stopping by, glad you enjoyed Noah- You don't know how right you are! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Enjoyed this, yes, a smile can mean so very much...with so little effort...and the rewards are so great...to both. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
How beautifully you tell of the way a simple smile can make the heart sing. I really like the way this poem brought a smile to my face. Thank you. |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Barry- Thank you, sir. Twas a simple act of kindness at just the right moment. Startime- Thank you. I'm more than happy to share the feeling... [This message has been edited by Edder (10-11-2003 12:52 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Edder Well done enjoyed. |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Isn't it good to know that sometimes a smile is all it takes..... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
This is so sweet...sometimes we get so caught up in wanting the big picture we forget to inhale the small stuff...  Susan |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Seymour- Thank you for the read, I'm honored. James- amazing how such a small gesture can turn your whole day around, isn't it? Thanks for your time. Susan- as a friend recently reminded me, it's the little things that count. thanks dahhlin' |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Lovely, Eddles. Absolutely lovely  |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
is this the one you refered to, ya know "the sappy stuff"... its gorgeous, and sweet, and oozing with charm  come on, how many do i need to reply to in order to get you to put a new one up? come on buddy |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
LMAO Don't you know by now Ed is a HUGE word tease? love ya Ed!"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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