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Wild Summer Onions (Pick, Pick, Puck)
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Wild Summer Onions (Pick, Pick, Puck) |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Pick... Pick..... Picking... Summer onions Along the trail As a wise yet inno- Cents found along the road Picked up... Pick... Pick.... Picking... Tossed away For more needy souls As she studies the Puck Puck Puckering Of her mouth That holds the onion Sweetness meeting something She cannot quite describe... Mommy looks at her like she is icky But mommy doesn't know The secrets that she finds Inside the summer onions... Pick Pick Puck I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. --Chang Tzu [This message has been edited by KoKo (09-22-2003 04:08 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this brought such a big, Pooh-bear smile to my heart, sweet friend, I have so much respect for those who contribute to the needy and to see such a gentle soul picking for good brings great warmth to me! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Noah, I'm very touched that this touched you!! Hehehe, it's always really great to get a reply from you  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
KoKo, I could see and taste this one. I enjoyed it. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Thank you, Nan  |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Best to learn that secret as a child, if one can. Enjoyed this little scene. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
good write,,, |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
mmm... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is very cute, Koko! Core |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
you know i love these thoughts from you! it's good to see you writing again. love ya |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your poem is as delightful as you are!  Hugs & Smiles, EA |
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