Open Poetry #29 |
The Gift Of Choosing To Be Male |
icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
What is it to be male that with our failures in life we redefine success? Have you ever asked? I know that you have wondered. Born without the need for directions, instructions, coupled with the unrepentant yearnings to exceed in our excess, puzzled by the fear and ignorance of those who stumble over what it takes to please a man, we do sense such understandings are for time left to be wasted by the others, those who make up the distaff pole of this bipolar lot. We are not encumbered by sense or sensibility, and as such are not ashamed to be free to believe and then discount, by choice, what is right before our eyes; I swear to you, in the tired cracking voice I've earned, on all that I believe is holy in this life, that being male can be simply the greatest state of being free. Even if locked down and broken, with the yang of rage so far from reach its name can not be spoken, a man can shut his mind away inside himself and facing the abyss run toward all that terrorized his every waking thought corrosively consuming the very fibers of his soul; yes, run, with joyful madness gleaming in his eyes, even if the only choice remaining is the leap and the ecstatic glory of the fall. ©2003 by icebox |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
you sir, are brilliant |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
fabulous,,,
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MorninGlory Member
since 2003-08-30
Posts 175Oklahoma |
You have a voice that must be heard, you are an amazing writer, my friend. This overwhelms me - ~ becky |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Wasn't it you that told be before that all I had to do was show up?? lol... What you write is true...I have seen the stampede...and didn't move quick enough.. Susan |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Perhaps by exploring the inner abyss of your icebox mind, I shall gain new insights to that proverbially impalpable place called the male mind... Thankya, kind sir... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's always wonderful to gather in some perspective...when one wants to share it. Thank you, Sir. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I'm coming back as a man! lol Have I ever mentioned what a fine writer I believe you to be? Well, I'm saying it now! EA ~ from the distaff side of the human equation |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good God icey, you continue to blow me away with what are probably just thoughts that continually pass through that brilliant mind of yours . . . amazing xxoo |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox...you shine a light on the wonder of this unique and interesting gender. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
.....we got it made..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Icebox, I too agree with your sentiments and beliefs so well, dearest friend, mankind is definitely tainted with disillusionment and fault, but I guess the beauty in being a man is that we have much of an adventure to discover and realize the faults and each fall we make we grow and that is such a rewarding accomplishment to peel away each layer and discover new truths! (sigh) You are one inspiring poet, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
LOL @ Nan...it's worth a shot... Enjoyed this, icey...a brilliant mind, indeed. When the power of love overcomes the |
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