Open Poetry #29 |
If I could |
allamericanjoe Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 116Iredell county, NC |
How would things be different, If I had only been different then? Just how different would we be, If I could change the when? Would the sun shine that much brighter? Or the maountains stand more proud? If I could infuse my thoughts with yours, And dispell your fearfull cloud. Would the seas be any deeper? Would the sky be any more blue? If I could ease your doubting mind, And prove my love to you? Would the stars be closer within my grasp? Would distant planets I be able to see? All of this would would become possible, If I could have you here with me. "The greatest gift a father can give to his daughter is to love her mother." [This message has been edited by allamericanjoe (10-09-2003 08:01 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
allamericanjoe Enjoyed the read. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
So beautiful--so sad and lonely. EA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
To attempt to go back and change the past would take you further from the here and now. Learn from it, heed the lessons, carve a new future... one day at a time. Well done, Joe. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
leave it...going forward a lot more cultured, nurtured and maturely responsible from it, not to mention, knowing true love which came from within you. The desire alone will spead an even applica' of woven magic just for you. Hugs... |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
If's tend to keep us down and longing for so much more.You've realized the cost now release the pain and let your wondrous light shine again.You'll have the truest of love and will hold it tnederly within your arms and share with all the world the joy you've found. Crystal |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a very heart-felt and loving write. I could feel the emotion in your words. Thanks for sharing your feelings with us. Hugs Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful heartfelt piece here Joe... Thank you for sharing this with us. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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