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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 This was a good day to court layers, not only for their nature of colors and shifting shapes but asking the why of their cause for giving eyes reasons to see beyond… the day lent to moments where, when the sun was just right it streamed through the fog of mind streaming through trees, casting spells, paralleling prismatic patinas, hues hugging horizontally, as they do, without fail without question… and I wanted to grasp the quality of floating gems, for you, but beauty is fleeting and all things mysterious fade into light this was the day I saw funnels of fog light dance on a river ~ several hundred small funnels of spirit matter attempting to draw loose from the water, to float upwards, to beyond rooting in me a thought to think of times not now, not here, but of then, and there, as ever was, so I did what I do, in an attempt at understanding, and looked for a sign… when I saw him… so high above, looking strangely ancient, on his way toward the light, to a doorway beyond where understanding is held on a higher realm, there, on a plane that calls out to those who listen even through the cacophony even when they cannot believe that they, too, can lift layers to see just a little more…  [This message has been edited by Sunshine (10-08-2003 06:25 PM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
This gave me chills, and was absolutely beautiful....there is so much beauty painted by a mysterious creation which is in and with us all, BRAVO, I loved this and thank you for composing and sharing.  Good Morning |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
good |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
paralleling prismatic patinas, hues hugging horizontally, as they do, without fail without question… and I wanted to grasp the quality of floating gems, for you, but beauty is fleeting and all things mysterious fade into light this was the day I saw funnels of fog light dance on a river ~ several hundred small funnels of spirit matter attempting to draw loose from the water, to float upwards, to beyond ================================ paralleling prismatic patinas, hues hugging horizontally I'm going to pretend you wrote those lines just to make a moth smile.   This is such a cool poem...your words rise with the same spirit from which your inspiration came. Lovely mystical write poetess of the sun.   "Nature's first green is gold, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I felt as though I was rising on the graceful wings of a butterfly into the beyond...  Loveya, Sun Ball! Keep on shining! Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I'm smiling and you know it! Yes! I love it and it's even more beautiful here. A keeper for sure! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderfully captured and expressed...beautiful.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Sissie..very gentle smile..now you KNOW I like this. What a wonderful flow of all. Thank you for sharing this one |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
beyond where understanding is held on a higher realm, there, on a plane that calls out to those who listen even through the cacophony even when they cannot believe that they, too, can lift layers to see just a little more… SunshineyOne, it's so good to be home, isn't it?  Hugs  Ethel |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful, dear Karilea, very touching too! You just have seen MORE and shared so well! Loving you, Margherita |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh my Karilea ... fantabulous words and thoughts and I know I floated on a cloud while reading this. You are wonderful ... hugs, Marti Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea...I knew something beautiful would come from those photos, where you caught more spirit than light. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
but beauty is fleeting and all things mysterious fade into light ...... it is so and so it is ... Regards Sudhir |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
so I did what I do, in an attempt at understanding, and looked for a sign… when I saw him… so high above, looking strangely ancient, on his way toward the light, to a doorway beyond where understanding is held on a higher realm, there, on a plane that calls out to those who listen even through the cacophony even when they cannot believe that they, too, can lift layers to see just a little more… Oh Karilea, this is stunning, absolutely. Thank you so much for sharing him with us, for capturing him and enabling us to "see just that little more" The poem, the images all beautiful. Maree  keeping this. fate is not just whose cooking smells good but which way the wind blows (Ani DiFranco) [This message has been edited by Sunshine (10-08-2003 06:26 PM).] |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Always layers in a Sunshine poem....layers within layers. Beautifully done, lady poet! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Karilea, this is beautifully tranquil, sweet friend, the sky certainly isn't the limit, for some places just aren't born for barriers and layers! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and I wanted to grasp the quality of floating gems, for you, but beauty is fleeting and all things mysterious fade into light this was the day I saw funnels of fog light dance on a river ~ several hundred small funnels of spirit matter attempting to draw loose from the water, to float upwards, to beyond rooting in me a thought to think of times not now, not here, but of then, and there, as ever was, This is incredibly lovely, lady... I thank you for sharing it. *S* |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
like a spell...captivating my heart...amazing...I'm having a moment... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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