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silly attempt at writing a real poem
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silly attempt at writing a real poem |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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I try to let these thoughts roll off my shoulders but... they keep on creeping up on me when you ramble nonsense in my ear 3 in the morning I'm just a silly girl hungry for attention or atleast that's what I try to convince myself... someone must think it quite amusing actually yeah, really I'm laughing ha.. ha.. ha.. so amusing that you know that proverbial rock and a hard place yeah well I stubbed more than my big toe...  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
Nice...you have a voice, and I hear it! Larry |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I have been told that my poetry is silliness, and that I just want attention... but dear Ceinwyn, we both know, don't we, that's not it at all... you keep sharing. I'll keep reading.  |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
awwwwwwww  yes that's not it at all..see you know thanks for being so sweet..& thanks Larry I have a voice ironic tho I lost it this morning silly cold If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Your attempts are always wonderful and it's my opinion that all your writes are real poems  You are talented, tenderhearted, and filled with such a wondrous spirit that it's amazing to see.Keep on writing and let that talent flourish so that you can share it with all.  Crystal |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kris, you're adorable!  Linda |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
not to worry-you will recover arthur |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Awww... Cool words.  |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kris, I feel that you're talking about more in this poem, than just about writing...aren't you? Keep writing, sweetie.  By the way, I hope that your cold gets better. Hugs Ethel |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
thanks guys... Linda nei you're the one that's adorable And sweet Ethel thanks yeah pretty much you got me figured out If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
cute, really cute |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Kristen, your poems are always wonderful and special to us, sweet friend, I too always feel silly when writing much of my work but I believe poetry is meant to feel silly all the time and I love what your heart expresses! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Yes! The very last poem I posted was scribbled in the dark, on a little pad I keep to towel-up such things when I start drooling them in the wee hours..... boy does this one sing to me! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I really like what you write. I don't always respond as typing is sometimes difficult for me. However, you are a 'real poet who writes real poems.' You keep writing .... huggles, Marti Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this write very much. *S* And if our poems are cries for attention... well... don't we all need some now and then? *S* |
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