Open Poetry #29 |
It Was Only A Dream Revised |
froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
You set my heart afire, Filled my soul with a desire of sin. Closing my eyes I felt the warmth of your touch upon my skin as my heart pounded with anticipation. Your touch is like that I've never known As were your kisses. Reaching out for you... I realized it was only a dream. Do not wake me for this is where...I wish to be. |
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Marty Baird Member
since 2003-09-20
Posts 90Georgia, U.S. |
Dreaming can be enjoyable |
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PsychoticBunni Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 162Mythical Atlantis |
wow. thst is so awesome!! i really like it cuz i think about that all the time. lol. catholic skool grl gets hot and heavy lol. Meg-cheauvanistsshould be tortured mercilessly by being tied to a mast and listening to Sirens singing their sexual song |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
"I realized it was only a dream. Do not wake me for this is where...I wish to be. " Yes...dream can be even better than reality, if it's just the right one. Hold it tight, it may be trying to tell you something. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I know this feeling ever too well and believe dreaming is my favorite part of day as well! (sigh) Here's wishing for all your dreams to come true, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet E.J, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is a great dream.Your writes intrigue me more and more. Crystal |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Thank-you all for the nice comments. Sometimes I wonder about my writing :-) |
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