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Fountain of Your Love
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Fountain of Your Love |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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 Take me to the Paradise That lies within your heart Lay me 'neath the azure sky above Let me feel the silver spray Touch rainbows in the mist And bathe within the fountain of your love... Colors form upon the words Escaping whispered lips Your touch becomes the garden of my soul I dive into the waters deep Our pool of sweet delights Awash within the love that makes me whole... No pleasure greater could there be No gift more treasured then To share the moments spent upon that shore So, take me to your Paradise Together we will bathe Within the pools Beneath the fountain rainbows Evermore... Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (10-08-2003 05:02 AM).] |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
full of passion and love! Liked the photo and your romantic poetry! I may need some advice about living in England, etc.. ~ARH |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
soft as the mist from the waterfall.... warm and feminine...made me feel amorous >>ice<< |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi ARH, and will be most happy to share what I know as a new 'Brit'!!!! It's a beautiful place full of warm hearted people, and inspiration for poetry everywhere you look! So, feel free to email me, and we'll talk, ok? Thank you for your reply...~S~ Hi ice, and yes...something about the setting of the image that brings out warm thoughts, eh? I know what you mean!!! Thank you, ice...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
No pleasure greater could there be No gift more treasured then To share the moments spent upon that shore So, take me to your Paradise Together we will bathe Within the pools Beneath the fountain rainbows Evermore... Astoundingly gentle, heartwarming and devotional...very much enjoyed. I am astounded by your semblance to a friend of mine. Amazingly identicle. Her name was Beth and she lived in the Poconos...back then we worked together and became friends. She married a doctor and they have moved away now...but whata lady she was. We had a great time at work together. so, you have a sister, smiles and hugs. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi LeeJ, and am so glad that you enjoyed this write!!!! Thank you. And I've always believed that people had doubles, and have seen that to be true for myself. Do you keep in touch with your friend? I wish for my 'sister' all the happiness, and thank you for telling me about her...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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allamericanjoe Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 116Iredell county, NC |
Beautiful poem! And the picture is as well. Thank you for a wonderful read. And thank you for the critique on "My Castle Walls". You were right on. "The greatest gift a father can give to his daughter is to love her mother." |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi allamericanjoe! And thank you for the nice reply...it's always good to see friends show up in your spot!! I'm glad you didn't mind the critique, as we're all friends here, and I always enjoy getting another perspective on writing, too. So, anyway...it's good to have you at Passions, and thanks again...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful, Sunnyone. Both, the picture and the poem. |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
returning to those dayd maybe closer than i once thought. or at least id like to think so. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Sunnyone, this is sooooooo pretty, sweet friend, I love fountains so much and when they're waterfalls, they're my favorite, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is so magical, sweet friend, may the rainbows always bring you blessings, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
No pleasure greater could there be No gift more treasured then To share the moments spent upon that shore So, take me to your Paradise Together we will bathe Within the pools Beneath the fountain rainbows Evermore Absolutely beautiful, Sunny. Good to see you, Lady.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Sue, and thank you so much...it's good to see my good friend here!!! ~S~ Hi dertah, and nice to meet you! Yes, I wish for you all those good things too...and thank you for joining me today...~S~ Hi Noah, and I have always loved waterfalls, out in nature, too. They are uniquely beatiful, and some of God's best artwork creations!! Thank you, lil brother...~S~ Hi Ethel, and I know that you and Gary have already found your waterfall, eh? Much love to you both, and so good to see you here, dear friend! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your touch becomes the garden of my soul I dive into the waters deep Our pool of sweet delights Awash within the love that makes me whole... No pleasure greater could there be No gift more treasured then To share the moments spent upon that shore So, take me to your Paradise Together we will bathe Within the pools Beneath the fountain rainbows Evermore... What a beautiful picture you paint of the magic that happens with love... I like this very much! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunnyone Lovely, may you have all this and more. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Beautiful picture, wondrous words, and a passionate heart.This was very full of life and love.  Crystal |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi suthern, and thank you so much! Yes, I think love is like a waterfall in many ways...the magic lies within the giving...~S~ Hi Seymour, and oh what a nice wish that was from you, my dear friend!! Yes, I think I found my waterfall at last...thank you...~S~ Hi Crystal, and you always write the nicest replies...it's really appreciated, and I thank you! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed your beautiful write and pic to portray it compleatly,,, |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
"No pleasure greater could there be No gift more treasured then To share the moments spent upon that shore So, take me to your Paradise Together we will bathe Within the pools Beneath the fountain rainbows Evermore..." Sunnyone, this is very nice, thank you for sharing. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ A poetic piece of paradise spilleth from the fount of thy pen...  Love and Light, Linda |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked this |
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