Open Poetry #28 |
A Butterfly Sings |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
A Butterfly Sings he showed me things on waxen wings in a lesson to fly just untie the strings and a butterfly sings soaring through the sky "I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...mellifluently indeed... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Monarchly onomatopoetic... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
tell me truly before i die is it really that simple my own strings, to untie? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
certain men tie you up, some set you free |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I have read this several times..because it is so soothing~ *s M |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Beautiful. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
There's nothing better, though, than becoming the butterfly. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
It's not as easy for us girls to untie the strings. I still live in the same town as my mama. Just can't seem to let go. So I think it's harder for us in all things. Just my thinking. SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nicely written,, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Helen this one is mine OK? Please? *tossing you scissors* xxoo |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Hi 1slick_lady... This is absolutely lovely. The title made me curious, and now I'm glad I stopped by! One for the library. Bec "Now, Harry you must know all about Muggles, tell me, what exactly is the function of a rubber duck?" ~ Arthur Weasley |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
I don't think this could have been put any better....and with as much grace!!!! I'm trying hard to fly!!!! ~~Kings' Angel~~ |
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