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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2003-08-15 04:37 PM

Scattered
~*Marge Tindal*~

~Scattered
Thoughts disarrayed
Spilling this ink-of-think
Inking blotches across the rhyme
Indigo moments of quilling combined
Define poetic trait of mine
Gathering momentum
Forever flung
Scattered~

*Just a little encouragement from a good friend inspired this Rictameter*

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-08-15 04:49 PM

very nicely penned,
very enjoyable read,,

Betty
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since 2002-08-13

Posts 1159
Virginia

2 posted 2003-08-15 07:19 PM

I like this very much.
Betty

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-08-15 07:33 PM

you sure are gathering momentum
*s

always fun to read your scatterings, Marge

hugs
M

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

4 posted 2003-08-16 09:10 AM

Wonderful rictameter, Marge. I have to try one of these again, I say "vehemently." 'Tis the word of the day it seems.

Hugs,
Patricia

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-08-16 09:17 AM

Great ricameter Marge!
I had to smile as this reminded me of myself
and my scattered thoughts.

~Morning hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

6 posted 2003-08-16 09:21 AM

Scattered ... ohhh this is me, too, right now.

Nicely penned piece here dear Lady and it looks lovely, too.

Enjoyed with a smile.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

7 posted 2003-08-16 04:42 PM

Dear Marge: A treat to see and read! Reading whatever you write, always is a pleasure.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-08-16 04:49 PM

as always...

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

9 posted 2003-08-16 11:05 PM

Ah, some days our thoughts are elsewhere and it's hard to concentrate. How well I know this scenerio!

Thank you for 'your' inspiration which came shining through in this piece.

Hugs, Marti

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