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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-16 12:43 PM

The fool,
he intrigues me
with laughter,
aloof cackle.

Dare I stare
at the hanged man?
He may open his eyes,
and beckon me
with his bloodlet hands.

Queen of Pentacles,
her dark emotion:
reverse.

Aloud a somber
card faces
downward..

Devil,
or death.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-08-16 12:53 PM

I'm not familiar with devil or death, however i do know angles that are devils,lol

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

2 posted 2003-08-16 02:15 AM

dare you stare, the beckoning just might be too hard to resist, again my poetry queen, beautiful...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

MoniDaPoet
Member

since 2003-08-14

Posts 73
California, USA

3 posted 2003-08-16 12:17 PM

You are absolutely sinister! God, I love that! No one's read my poem 'The Beginning of the Drink'. I'd love to get your opinion on it. BTW, please write more like this one.

I have only my genius to declare!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-08-16 12:49 PM

death for me please . . .
a transcendence from the old into the new . . . change change change
nice thoughts Kaoru
xxoo

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2003-08-16 01:29 PM

i try not to go for a reading, unless i really really want to know, and chances are i already know already........
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
liked this much

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

6 posted 2003-08-19 09:12 AM

I long to go for a reading.

it fascinates me.
I told myself I would this summer, my mother also, thanks for reminding me.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2003-08-19 09:31 AM

Yep me to. I have never been read...and I want to...

Nice write..

Susan

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

8 posted 2003-08-20 01:59 PM

change would be nice..or perhaps even being loosened from the shackles...enjoyed

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

9 posted 2003-08-20 02:29 PM

the readings are often a bit portending... while the cards themselves seem to laugh at us.. taunt us perhaps to see ourselves in true...

nicely written... I enjoyed

SuperGlueRyan
Junior Member

since 2003-06-16

Posts 45
Possum Kingdom

10 posted 2003-08-20 02:52 PM

Dare I stare
at the hanged man?

I can empathize with this line much, especially feeling like the hanged man at times.
Glad to be among poets such as yourself.

~Stoic

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

11 posted 2003-08-20 03:43 PM

I understood this and goodness do you have a way with words!! Awesome!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light