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CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2003-08-15 07:17 PM

Teardrop

Emerged as crystal envoy dressed,
Your slow descent I barely feel.
A single teardrop so expressed
-- Reveal to all what I conceal.

The essence of the stormy ocean
Surging in my heart and soul
-- Buried feelings; chained emotion --
Their secrets you so boldly stole.

So down you flow in your brief reign
Of such a solemn, silent way.
Thus wash away the mask I feign --
As truth revealed will seize the day.

Then as you close your solo show
And leave a stamp of silver seal --
I stand to know what you bestow
-- Your journey finds me true and real.

CG

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-08-15 07:38 PM

CastleGuard~
This is as tender a penning as I'll read this day~
Beautiful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

2 posted 2003-08-15 07:49 PM

Beautifully written.

~Tier

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2003-08-15 11:01 PM

Your write brought forth some feelings I have had about a friend of mine...a close and similar expression. Thank you. TD

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

4 posted 2003-08-16 12:06 PM

You have a wonderful command of cadence, rhyme, and expression in a form and stye to which I am especially partial. Back to the top!

-MVS

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Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

5 posted 2003-08-16 02:44 PM

upon reading this, i am not sure if
it's the beauty or the perfect rhythm
and cadence of this that leaves me more
speechless. all i can say is...beautiful!
take care
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

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