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How Then Exactly
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How Then Exactly |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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How Then Exactly ~*Marge Tindal*~ How then, pray tell, am I to love you as distance is the echo that keeps us reverberating off the canyons of time How then exactly, would I so remember your falling into my welling of rhyme How exactly then could I move me away from this need of wanting more of you Drinking from fountains of your youth splendorous dream recalling yesterday How then, exactly, would I ever again love another as I have so loved you ? *So totally inspired by Lucky* /pip/Forum81/HTML/000165.html ~Thank you, my friend~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Great work... a nice inspiring work bringing out an equally nice inspired work... it can't get much better than this, I feel... regards sudhir |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...Such heart catching words...so very well inspired.  |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
it looks like it all yours Sis... and not bad at all if I do say so. best friend best finds, dale |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"dream recalling yesterday How then, exactly, would I ever again love another as I have so loved you ?" this is AWESOME such a keeper!!  |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
First Marge...thanks for directing me to Mr. Lucky. Holy smokes...I am so impressed with his work. First time I have read him! Second...Lady...it seems this writing was meant for me. It is like you had written it just for me. Incredible piece of writing and isn't it just wonderful the inspiration we find here in our great poets? Not just in our own writing either...but words to live by as well. Hugs to you, Ms. Tindal! Patricia |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Wow, both of you wow! into my library. much love gem xxxx |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: A wonderful poem and I love the phraseology, which inspires beautiful scenes. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
A beautifully inspiring read. Maggie |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Right from your heart...answers come and answers go...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Friends~ As honestly as I can say it .. I can't take credit for this piece (oh, I know my name is on it) but truth is it was destined to fall into my inking well as soon as I read Lucky's beautiful piece. It dripped rapid-fire in less time it takes to eat a bag of Gummi Bears~ So ... destiny is a magical thing ... if it was 'destined' to be yours ... I *gift* it to you !  Lucky~ Thank you dear man~ You are friend indeed~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
.....are you trying to tell us you're, uh, square? I know, only if Lucky is dippy...... Nice work, Marge! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is so pretty Marge. Betty |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lovely inspiration and lovely verse. Enjoyed this, Marge. Hugs, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I enjoyed this as well.. Thank you. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I enjoyed this very much, Marge. Thank you. Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful...wondering how I missed it...glad I didn't altogether |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
How then, exactly, would I ever again love another as I have so loved you its really wonderfull from the depths of heart. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you all SO much ... as I said before, I am so thankful for the inspire that pours poetry into my heart~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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