TWENTY OR LESS...#146 (fullfilling serenity blaze's request...)

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TWENTY OR LESS...#146 (fullfilling serenity blaze's request...)

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2003-08-15 01:01 PM

TWENTY OR LESS…#146

Copyright 2003 by:Mark V Sheldon

(fulfilling serenity blaze’s request…)

blind dismay

allowing tyrant temper
to be

unforgiving

briars growing
across straight path

respite came to this

a prickly end

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2003-08-15 01:11 PM

Very nicely done!

Susan

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2003-08-15 01:12 PM

Indeed.

I thank you Mark. You are much more obliging than HE is.

I say we go with hope. At least the FRIENDSHIP might be salvaged.

There is nothing you can't do.

Thanks again, with hugs.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-08-15 01:56 PM

So true. That can be about divorce and about an ex-boyfriend that is a butthole.

Cold hands means a warm heart

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

4 posted 2003-08-15 02:32 PM

This one rings true.Divorce is never easy.
angelblueyes

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

5 posted 2003-08-15 04:54 PM

Ouch. Like rounding a corner...

...and running into a cactus.

Prickly well written.

CG

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

6 posted 2003-08-15 04:57 PM

nicely done,,,

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2003-08-15 07:35 PM

briars growing
across straight path

I have crossed them once or twice... I bled easily

M

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2003-08-15 08:13 PM

Excellent Mark...
Very well done!
~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

9 posted 2003-08-16 11:43 AM

Thank you, Susan.

serenity blaze: ...words of wisdom. Thanks for the inspire.

the_loner_23: ...to put it bluntly -- and humorously...

Crystal:  Divorce sucks...  and scars outlooks on marriage.

CastleGuard:  There are many blind corners in life...

Thank you, Q.

Maureen:  Bloody thorns...

Thank you, Nancy.

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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