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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Gray Soul You were a streak of color against a graying soul but have been cheated once more. The heat of the times wilting the voice of love, the storm of excite losing its strength. The heart trailing the mind never to know what is behind the green door... ~~*~~ 20 plus 1...again to wake to a smiling face, to lift the covers to the day and watch your eyes following... my dream addiction ~~*~~ nakdthoughtisms I am your biggest fan unveiled but not appreciated empty me and you will find memories of you my eyes read through you and see your denial you have to crawl before you walk and walk before you run... we never got beyond the lift M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
An appreciative  to you, Maureen. You've got some zingers today! This one especially stood out for me:you have to crawl before you walk and walk before you run... we never got beyond the lift Don't ebb the flow... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Maureen, these were very good.I always enjoy reading your writes angelblueyes |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Mark. I wrote them a day or two ago when I was debating whether to post anymore...just little bits that would not let my brain rest. and that last one...well I guess I was thinking of all those cliche's that don't fit my life. This one does. I thank you for all those less thans that were just collecting brain dust until you started posting yours. grateful to you M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
angelblueyes, thank you for your kind words and for your support. You are appreciated hugss M |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh Maureen, your writing is so beautiful, each one of these is lovely. I think I liked the nakdthougtisms most of all. hugs M~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I will stay away from the green door, for obvious reasons. But loved the way you tossed these "unsupported bits" together-- sterling imagery and the emotion smacks. A well tossed salad, lady. Enjoyed. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
all fantastic M |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WynterFriend~ 'empty me and you will find memories of you' Oh my ! So very, very beautiful ... only nine words that speak volumes~ Not post ? Not post ? No way I'll let you pull THAT one off~ Love you girlie~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Lori, just practicing with words, while watching the sibling rivalry  Do you think I have coined a new word..and if so could it be mine without copywriting it? thinking on it~ M Karen, haaaa..you are funny! I had gathered a few thoughts and didnt want to load the pages with 20's or less. Some days I don't even support my own worded bits. Thank you Aenimal, I appreciate your response thanks. Marge, some days I think I have worn out my poetness..if that is such a word..and try to not think in rhyme or even non rhyme but it always sneaks up on me and forces me to release it... I am not good at choicing and just go with the flow...usually~ Thank you Marge hugs M |
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