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TWENTY OR LESS...#145

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

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In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2003-08-15 10:36 AM

TWENTY OR LESS…#145

Copyright 2003 by:Mark V Sheldon

In a single patch of
keen-edged dare

I discovered

no boss could belittle

my dreams

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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1 posted 2003-08-15 10:47 AM

I love it..the keen-edged dare and all...

*s

I left you another 20 plus 1 in my unsupported bits...probably a few other short ones fit the bill, too.

(and I think I coined a new word "nakdthoughtisms")
M

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angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

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2 posted 2003-08-15 10:51 AM

I love the realization in this that your dreams can't be taken.Very well done

angelblueyes

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~

3 posted 2003-08-15 10:54 AM

Sounds as if you took a risk and you came out on top!!!! Good strong feeling I was left with. Go get 'em!
Bravo!!!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (08-15-2003 10:55 AM).]

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

4 posted 2003-08-15 01:09 PM

Much obliged, Maureen...

Thank you, Crystal.

SharaRose, without risk, what is life...?

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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